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We are alone now,
and we take a stand;
two feet shaking into one.
Our minds curdle,
what our eyes cannot perceive;
generating genotypes into our ghastly genome.
Everybody is obessed,
trying to recover exaggerated insercurities;
tie the knot, then slack the eye,
and achieve the useless lies.
There is no point in persecution,
we are self-absorbed diseases,
contaminating each other.
We've been wasting our time;
I did not need your answers,
and you didn't need mine.
Just how i feel towards people in general really.

I guess i think this whole system is pointless.
:iconblackdav666:
another really strong and tight piece of writing, really like it. very powerfull use of illiteration "generating genotypes into our ghastly genome"

you give of a great sence of just giving up and the whole poem reflects on the attitudes of so many people.

very good.

enjoed reading it!1

Phil
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:iconcoolcucumber:
Thankyou :)

As always i try my best.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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