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We are alone now,
and we take a stand;
two feet shaking into one.
Our minds curdle,
what our eyes cannot perceive;
generating genotypes into our ghastly genome.
Everybody is obessed,
trying to recover exaggerated insercurities;
tie the knot, then slack the eye,
and achieve the useless lies.
There is no point in persecution,
we are self-absorbed diseases,
contaminating each other.
We've been wasting our time;
I did not need your answers,
and you didn't need mine.
Just how i feel towards people in general really.

I guess i think this whole system is pointless.
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blackdav666 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2006
another really strong and tight piece of writing, really like it. very powerfull use of illiteration "generating genotypes into our ghastly genome"

you give of a great sence of just giving up and the whole poem reflects on the attitudes of so many people.

very good.

enjoed reading it!1

Phil
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coolcucumber Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2006   Writer
Thankyou :)

As always i try my best.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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